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Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2
Hi! Teardrop here! First of all, I really really liked this. I thought it was adorable and sweet. I have to say, I'm jealous. I wish I could write long ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Clueless
Hi! Teardrop here! Overall, I think this is really nicely done. The beginning drew me in and made me wanna keep reading. I couldn't find any more nitpicks or mistakes. ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Valentine's Innocence (For Teardrop's Contest)
Hi! Teardrop here! Anyway, I thought this was really sweet. I liked the whole theme of it. I agree, this does belong on an Above The Influence commercial. XD ( ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: The End
Hi! Teardrop here! ( Decided to review all the entries, so here it goes. ) Also, it wasn't late. XD Thank you so much for entering, I enjoyed this a ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Death's Embrace
Thank you so much! : D
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Death's Melting Clock
Oh, alrighty then that makes more sense. XD Sorry about that, as you can see reviewing poetry isn't my forte. Sorry!
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Death's Embrace
: D Thank you. I think you've now officially made my day. : )
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: A Story In New York (2)
Hi! Teardrop here to review this today! First of all, I suggest spacing this out a lot. The first part is one huge paragraph, and all the dialogue is mashed ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: The Fight
Hi! I'm Tear, and I'm going to review this today. First of all, I thought this was really interesting. Before posting, I suggest looking over your work to make sure ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Death's Embrace
Thanks, both of you for the reviews. : )
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Death's Embrace
Well, I wrote this in like five minutes a really long time ago... I haven't posted anything in a while so I dug this up. :shock: :smt003 Death's Embrace I ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Broken Glass Chapter 2
Hi! I'm Teardrop and I thought I might review this today! First of all, this is really short. I haven't read the first chapter though. And usually, in a chapter ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Death's Melting Clock
Hi! I'm Teardrop... I usually don't review poetry but for some reason today I'm in the mood... odd. I thought this was really interesting, kinda creepy in a way if ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Pain is good
Hi, well, I don't usually review poems but I really liked this so I thought I might drop a review on this while i'm here anyway! I loved this, really ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Two Spirits, One goal[accepting]
Profile: Teardrop Name: Monica Good half or bad half?: good half Age(14-20): 15 appearance: Tall and slim, blond hair, and dark eyes. : ) emohair.jpg strong points: Runs fast on ...
Feb 18, 2011
