Teardrop

Hi! I'm Tear! First of all, I thought this was really nice nice! It could have used a bit more detail however. I noticed a lot how you made some ...

Hi I'm Tear! One nitpick... He’s a portly old gentleman, simply strolling through the London streets, as if he knows this small piece of the world by heart I thought ...

Hi! I'm Tear! Anyhow, it's very short so there's not a lot to critique but I'll try my best! One day,on a summer evening, there sat a girl. The opening ...

Hi! I'm Teardrop. First of all I thought this was a good start and has a lot of potential. However, it could have used some editing and a lot of ...

Yeah Boy And Doll Face by Pierce The Veil just finished... Vegas by All Time Low just started. ^_^

Hi! I'm Teardrop! First of all, I thought this was good, yet it still could be improved. I thought that you could have ellaborated a bit more on emotions and ...

Hey. I'm Teardrop! Okay, really I think this is excellent. The scales are really amazing, and I think the eyes are gorgeous. The only thing I can think of is ...

Hey, I'm Teardrop! First of all, this was good. I liked it a lot. I haven't read the first chapter, so I'll try and give the best review I can. ...

Hey, I'm Teardrop! First of all, I really loved this. Really nice imagination, and I thought it was well-written as well. I thought that the girl in your story could ...

Hi! I'm Teardrop. Okay, so I read the first chapter beforehand, and I think I reviewed it, but I thought I might point out some stuff on this one too. ...

I really like this! I think a lot of people can relate, and it's really emotional. ^_^ Getting high and feeling low, Cutting deep and breathing shallow, These two lines ...

Wow, this is amazing! It's so beautifully written, and great imgination and emotion. I wish I could write like that. ^_^ I was crying towards the end of it! Really ...

Thanks so much!

This totally made my day! Really creative and fun, while it was well written too. It was amusing, and funny! I enjoyed reading it!

Hi! I'm Teardrop. First of all, I thought this was an interesting start. The details started out pretty good, but you lost it when you got to the dialogue. Dialogue ...