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Re: Broadcasting America
“C-SPAN is one unpaid electric bill away from being a radio station.” –Seth Meyers, at the 2011 White House Correspondent’s Dinner. Hey. Hey, you. Yeah, you in the jacket. Can ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Sun:Ocean
There's a cool mix of rhyme schemes in this one. The first stanza is very, very good. The couplet at the end reminds me of ye olde English poetry: simple ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: The Movie Marathon Equation
Short and sweet: this was a really cute piece and I enjoyed the youthful (and somewhat snarky) themes contained in it! The part about sleeping made me laugh; ahhhh, the ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Abstract Poem
I can see what you're going for here, but there's some lines in here that could be omitted for the good of the poem. I KNOW, writer's hate that word: ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Say this out loud.
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Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Confessions Of A Former Boy Scout
Have you ever liked a certain type of cookie so much that you feel like you need an injection of the pure goodness that is stored deep in the abyss ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Tears of the Spirit (Title pending)
I like the earthy feel to this. I mean, seeing that your username IS "medievalwriter", you've certainly fulfilled the requirements for good ole' poetry. The religious overtones add to the ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Feeling
Like what everybody else is saying, the switch of rhyme schemes is a bit abrupt and you should usually stick to the same form throughout a piece. But that certainly ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: That's Hot.
Thanks for the feedback, everybody! I wrote this a bit hastily so I could jump on this contest I really liked, but I'm glad you all got a kick out ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Uber Writer's Block Thread
I did have one particularly frustrating occasion where I almost lost the entirety of a novel I was/am working on because my computer contracted a mean, mean virus. That was ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Suburb
It seems we’ve reached the end of the tunnel Crying and howling out of joy for a new day But the strange thing is The skies are all still grey ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: That's Hot.
You’re going to laugh at this guy, because this story isn’t one with a happy ending and a beautiful girl kissing a nice boy with killer abs. Well, this dude ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: What's up!
Hey everybody on this expansive and lovely site! I'm T-Con, better known as TC, aka Timmy. But you can call me Tim, if that floats your Trojan horse on the ...
Jun 14, 2011
