Tazy

I am amazed no one else has comented it ws fantastic discription really drew the reader in.

It had a lot of emotion i loved it imensley

Good piece i liked it imesly.

AWSOME cant think of much else to say.

Loved it. It had a lot of emotion and it was short and sweet easy to read well writtten through and through.

I loved it i crave more. Keep writing and i'll keep reading.

*I wrote this when I was eleven in italy it's one of my only decent poems from that time. Just wondered what you thought. I've put it up as i ...

Julia sat in tears so desperate to be able to think and focus. But it was no use. No matter how hard she tried she couldn’t focus on her work. ...

I frantically opened the door slamming it shut behind me and bolting it shut. Finally I was safe the creature couldnt get me in here or so I thought. I ...

I dont know what to say other than um interesting

One word Fantastic

That was great wish i could write like that good on you

The wind howled the rain pelted down onto the windcsreen even with the wipers going you couldnt see properly. Then all of a suddent the car slid on the wet ...

One word wow

One word awsome you go girl