Tazo

Hello all! Thank you for your kind reviews so far! You all seem much happier with it than I am! Black Rose - a tanka is a lot like an ...

The Emperor’s Thumb Sand, sweat, muscles taunt, Sly smiles at lion’s teeth Sword’s threat keeping time Soul’s furnace heating his brow Tangled, tired One last kiss This is my haiku ...

I agree, I also like the carefree nature of this poem. It seems choppy to me though. I disagee with Angel17 as I rather enjoy that me, it's the "sing ...

It seems to me like there's real feeling behind this but it's hiding. I agree that you rely too much on some pretty cliche images - I would suggest going ...