Tazim

Really appreciate your review. Yes, I mean I can edit it but I'm going through a busy period and barely getting time to write. Also, I think my story needs ...

Thanks for your valuable advices. I started writing last year. So, I'm still learning a lot of things. And you're right I must be more patient regarding my characters so ...

Thank you so very much! And I'll make more paragraphs next time around. Again appreciate it!

This is my first short story I posted here. Pardon me for my mistakes and let your opinions know.