Tatra

A very interesting idea. I liked how you had the kids with powers and I liked how they were hunted. I am interested in seeing what the plot is for ...

Hello there! I have read the other two chapters, but you got decent enough reviews on those and I wanted to keep reading until I hit a point where I ...

This was an interesting continuation. I liked how he learned how to work the watch, but I think that things went a bit too fast in this chapter. I think ...

Several others have given you awesome reviews, so I am going to keep this fairly short. No sense in repeating what others have said and I'm planning on going on ...

An interesting start to a novel. I like how the protagonist was a cat and I like the use of foreshadowing that you have going on. And I like how ...

I liked this start, it really introduced the characters well and I'm interested in seeing how the nightmare connects to the other parts. I'm looking forward to seeing the character ...

A very interesting start. I like the idea of a modern Snow White and I'm interested in seeing how you connect Camilla to the story of Snow White. I also ...

I thought it was an interesting story. It reminded me of a fairy tale or a story that some one would speak out loud in story telling, which is a ...

This is an interesting start of a story, I do like the beginning that you have set up. The glimpse of the post apocalyptical world was interesting and I really ...

I really did like this piece, it was short and sweet. May is a good character and I really did like the descriptions of her and her vegetable garden. You ...

Wow, you actually made a rock's POV interesting, :) I liked how your rocks have personalities and everything, but they are still rocks. I thought it was very interesting that ...

Chrysalis: It's very interesting; I can't currently check on your summary for the novel, but I do have to wonder what the plot of this will be. It seems a ...

Hello! I went to go review the other chapters, but I then came here to review the prologue first. It sounds like an interesting start to a series, makes me ...

This is an interesting chapter; giving us more of a glimpse into your main character's heaven. Not in the dramatic, cheesy “good and bad” sense of that particular term, but ...

This is a great poem. The title really drew me in, but I like how it's not about the perfect couple in the library and is instead about these strong, ...