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I really liked this script; it was really funny. My kind of humor: random and crackish. :D I loved your characters and everything that happened in the script. BARTENDER: Here ...

This is an interesting start, but I totally agree with Ester on the slang; it makes it really hard to read. I do kind of like Jake, but I also ...

This sounds like an awesome song, something with a great message and hints as to how to sing it. :D Chorus I’d do anything to see your smile again to ...

I don't have much to add, given that your piece was so good and you've had several other great reviewers, but I just had to say something. Navita linked me ...

I've one just got up and I haven't done any reviews yet, but I just wanted to post that there are no recent additions with zero comments. There are still ...

I've reached 100 reviews for the whole time I've been on this site, which means that I've written 6 reviews for Review Day. :D I'm having fun, and even managed ...

Zombies are good. Especially in July, when the rest of your friends are writing about them. :D And we clearly are all mad, so I won't comment on that. :wink:

Homeschoolers unite! :D That being said, this is a very interesting topic to write on. I've never really thought about writing about homeschooling. I agree with the other reviewer about ...

:smt003 Have I ever steered you wrong? :piratedthread:

*glomps Liz* You shall fit in fine here! *Cackles evilly* No, really this site is awesome. Have an elephant! :elephant:

I agree with the others, you need more imagery in this. I think you're focusing too much on the form of the poem than what you're really saying in the ...

First thought is wow; these poems just sucked me in, from the moment I read the titles and through the poems themselves. I can definitely see how they are related. ...

The title was what made me click on the story, though I do agree with the other reviewers that it doesn't really fit with the story. But, it still is ...

You know, this kind of disturbs me. I mean, it so far sounds like an interesting story, but there are some elements that really do disturb me. We'll get to ...

A very interesting start to things, I can't wait to see how the Forsaken Rose goes. I love the storytelling tone to this prologue and I think it particularly fits ...