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I think this is a very good poem, lots of emotions shown. It would be better, and a bit more poem-like, if it had some more format to it. My ...

Wow, this was a great beginning. I love her fascination with the apple, how she died, and how she reacted to being dead. :D Like many stories, like many trees, ...

Vampires in Cinderella are interesting, and I like how you sort of followed Ever After's version of events. Sort of being the keyword, but it did remind me of Ever ...

An interesting continuation of the part before, revealing a bit more of who Amarie really is. Amarie ordered , stretching out her long legs [s]tightly encased in black britches[/s]. "Oh ...

A great start of a story, although I do agree that we could at least get deeper into foreshadowing to give the reader more of a hook. I'll just try ...

Renegades Jeremiah glanced back at his guide, who had lead him through this massive place, before knocking on the door in front of him. Jeremiah then waited a minute, but ...

I actually have a pretty fun list. Jim Carrey; Susanna Hoffs, who recorded 'Walk Like An Egyptian;' Muhammad Ali; Shari Lewis, Lampchop!; Al Capone; Anne Bronte; and Benjamin Franklin. There ...

I tried not to leave at least too many spoilers, because I do know that not everyone would know.... Hmm, the only one that I can really see as a ...

Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury. Although, I do have to admit that I had to go to Wikipedia to find the authors name, because of my terrible memory. But, I ...

I'd like to join in, if I can. I finally got enough reviews to get in the chat! *Says the one person to the people with lots, and lots of ...

I like this poem, the images brought about by your words. I like how this isn't your sappy love poem, and might even be a poem warning against that. I'm ...

An interesting story, I like the way you use magic within this. And, having a blind protagonist is interesting and not often done. I'd like to see what happens next. ...

I don't think this sounds rushed at all, I think the events are slow enough that it doesn't sound rushed. Yet another great chapter, that keeps leading the readers on. ...

Another great chapter, I like how you went back in the past to explain a few things. It was interesting seeing how the werewolves thought while hunting, and even just ...

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