Tatra

9/10 I like that saying, it was funny.

The story idea sounds very interesting, so it shouldn't be too difficult to find a plot. I'd think about what you want to include in your story, what you want ...

I really like this story. The title drew me in, though that's partly because I watch Stargate Atlantis, but the story grabbed me and dragged me through the story. I ...

Been some time since I've seen you. I never did comment on chapter five, but I couldn't find anything wrong with it. I still loved it though, just as I ...

This is a great poem, I do like how it goes from a child-like feel to the more threatening tone. I liked the imagery to it, and how the chalk ...

Sorry I took so long to review this, I went through a brief break in reviewing. But, I'm here to review. I think you have a good start, but I ...

I'm going to miss the chat, even if I haven't been on in a while. Starting count: 47

Happy Birthday!! :smt113 :birthday: :smt113 Cake for each of you!

Happy Birthday!! :birthday:

Also, the calendar had to end at some point, right? There's even a limit to the dates you can switch your computer to, doesn't mean that the world will end ...

You're right, things aren't quite right in both of your examples. But, writing really isn't that hard. There are only a few rules to make your story easier to understand. ...

The Rose She plucked a flower from the ground. A red rose. She gave it to her love, a mockery of tradition. He held it gently, until she left him. ...

I love your poem. I love the words used, and the imagery, beautiful. I only have two suggestion, the bold words. I think the first bold word would do better ...

Sorry this took so long, I've been a bit sick. I started this review, and then my head clogged up and I couldn't think enough to write out a good ...

I like this one, it was nice and funny. I really like your bad guy, he sort of reminds me of The Enchanted Forest Chronicles. But, I like how the ...