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A very interesting idea. I liked how you had the kids with powers and I liked how they were hunted. I am interested in seeing what the plot is for ...

Hello there! I have read the other two chapters, but you got decent enough reviews on those and I wanted to keep reading until I hit a point where I ...

My gift card from Swagbucks finally came in, so I bought the Journal and now I'm flailing quite happily. This is totally awesome and I'm definitely going to be posting ...

Truefax, first we had tropical storm Lee who made my week all rainy and now there's tropical storm Nate forming in the Gulf. Just had to point out Nate's transformation. ...

This was an interesting continuation. I liked how he learned how to work the watch, but I think that things went a bit too fast in this chapter. I think ...

Several others have given you awesome reviews, so I am going to keep this fairly short. No sense in repeating what others have said and I'm planning on going on ...

Welcome to YWS! I loved your story, it brought me to tears. The part where his mentor gave him a stick of gum right before the mentor died was truly ...

An interesting start to a novel. I like how the protagonist was a cat and I like the use of foreshadowing that you have going on. And I like how ...

Welcome to YWS!! The good thing about this site is that it really does improve your writing (which I'm sure isn't quite as bad as you say :wink: ). Even ...

I liked this start, it really introduced the characters well and I'm interested in seeing how the nightmare connects to the other parts. I'm looking forward to seeing the character ...

A very interesting start. I like the idea of a modern Snow White and I'm interested in seeing how you connect Camilla to the story of Snow White. I also ...

I thought it was an interesting story. It reminded me of a fairy tale or a story that some one would speak out loud in story telling, which is a ...

Chapter One: Explosions in the Night Darkness pressed in close in the abandoned part of town. With only a few street lights, vision was difficult and the warehouses loomed above ...

I usually open up a chapter in LSB and then just ramble on about my plot. I start at the beginning and try to continue on through the middle to ...

I've done Nano 5 times and I agree with everyone else. You need to relax your writing standards a bit to get it done. Don't focus on perfect, focus on ...