Tarshni

Thank you guys! Its a really long novel though. I geuss I will have to wait until I am done to focus on these things! I will check out the ...

I respect the criticism, but clearly you have absolutely no idea what these words mean or even what it is like to make love, not have 'sex'. I suggest you ...

Hi guys, I just want to know of any novel tips that you guys use. With regard to chapter lengths etc. Kind regards Tarshni

In a universe surrounded by words of destruction Awaiting a day that shall not rise, but living a fall that subsides my being Haunted by a thought and... a moment ...

wow! really amazing poem! It is incredable that you were able to write such a long poem that keeps you reading and drawn to what you are abouit to say ...

"I would have thought That after all this time, My Reason Would not have been what you are." Personally, I feel you use too many blunt stops where they aare ...

I like the fact that you have written your poem in a very unique style... although maybe if you had started each stanza with a differen word instead of 'another' ...

Really sweet piece, Love the carried out metaphore. It really is beautifully written!

If there was a way I could take your pain I'd cover your heart with mine If there were a way I could feel your sorrow I'd ask for your ...

sorry about that, I do know all that you are telling me, I actually had it short for sumwhere else that i posted it, completly forgot to change it. Thanks!!

Hey, I noticed quite a few mistakes throughout your poem. Even so, I found the message of your poem moving and extremely just. I think there are people out there ...

wow... i have to say this but poems that involve love move me.. the possible heart ache as well as the beauty of love itself... I love when both sides ...

The stillness of the world surrounds me Arousing only the life that exists around it But not me I am the outcast the doubt, the temptation and its death But ...

Really great poem... the words and imagery used was amazing. I think it can relate to a lot of people who often feel different and misplaced. extremely well written.

wow... Honestly I have a passion for children and cannot stand to see abuse. This poem just made me want to cry.. It is so sad... I love the way ...