Tamora

Keleria Walking towards the hut, Keleria couldn't help thinking about the little girl, Emma. The feeling she had given her was unsettling and disturbing, and keleria had no idea how ...

Interesting. Very nice to read, you've got the emotions portrayed well and that has helped me to enjoy it. Again, you have a beautiful writing style, that is wonderful read. ...

This is beautiful to read. It has a rythm, and wonderful feeling about it that really makes you smile, and think. Yes, there are a few typos that have already ...

Wow! you have some really powerful message here, and you've portrayed them so well! you've addressed some of the most important topics of today's society in such a strong and ...

OK, I've got a debate coming up, and I need help finding ideas to put into my argument against the taxing of fast foods. At the moment, we are mainly ...

Of course it's 'til!! it's supposed to be a smaller version of until, I just can't think of the grammar term right now. lol

I'm guessing this means that it worked this time? lol. OK, here goes: Name: Gordan Josegh Age/Appearance: 35 years old, 5'4, slight build, he exercises but not in excess, so ...

lol, 6.5/10 funny, but not great.

i doubt it somehow.

*glazed look* yes, we looove him...he is our leader, we would never defy him. *puts down signs* Hail Nate, the leader of YWS.

lol, gees Nate!!! *Starts making picket signs: "no more cheating", "give us a chance!!" Who wants to come help the protest!!! :D

I sat. That's all I could do. There was no music in my head now, no glorious symphony to comfort me; somehow my mind had shut that mechanism off, leaving ...

great! a new witch! Keleria The sight made her sick. How could Persephone actually blame herself for that mistake, how could she make herself feel bad for something someone else ...

Keleria She stared at Athene, astounded that she would lie so hugely to the child about something so important. when she looked around at the others, she realised that they ...

Woah! This is powerful! That's my first impression anyway, and I'm pretty sure that's what you were aiming for, so...Woah! Well done. The stucture of the paragraphs has really helped ...