Tamora

He's the Robot from the future, come to tell us what we are doing wrong, and laugh at our mistakes. Mwahahaha. And I sent him!!! you are all doomed! :shock: ...

Tamia could almost hear the children chattering, leaping from tree to tree, and see the the whispering branches of the village above ground. This is a really cool part, it ...

James was breathing heavily, his breath fogging up the window of the tiny room. It had been a close call, one small movement had caught her eye, she was perceptive, ...

Who is Pat Buchanan? I voted for the monkey, cos he's, like, all of us, you know? We could beat anyone!!! 8)

Have fun with things, that's cool, I don't really care, i mean i'm replying to something that was posted ages ago, and that's fine with me, I mean what's wrong ...

*shifty eyes* I don't know hhhmmmmm ssshhhh

That end part is a bit confusing. When you start to talk about her past the second sentance looks like he says it. Just think about how to correct it. ...

A great entrance to what could be great story, I like the suspense in the second paragraph, and the concept in the first paragraph sounds interesting, could be great if ...

This took me ages to write and i'm still new at this, so please review it for me?!

The motorbike revved as the rider put his foot down. Jacob's demonstration was going well, many had come to see his latest treasure as well as his inevitable growling from ...

This is a continuation of the first part. I would really appreciate any of you're views :wink: A cool breeze blew through the half-open window causing the brittle branches of ...

This is just the start, there's more to come.

Sunshine poured through the windows into the long, empty corridor. Flowers hung from baskets along the beams, while creepers crawled up the trellace. A cat slunk along the edge of ...

Keep writing! I'm hooked!

Excellent Prose! Wonderful descriptions of the settings and charactors. It leapt from one thing to another a bit and I found myself confused a bit. If you re write it ...