Tamora

Keira popped a sugar cube into her mouth, sucking slowly as she thought. Her mind was blank before the forest, but that didn't stop her form wanting to know the ...

I've made more changes, again! the tips are great, keep them coming guys!

I've made the changes that you have suggested. Thanks guys! Yes, Elelel, Brynden likes Lyllan, now calm down! and there's a reason why I used that description of Lyllan. I'm ...

The early-day sun shone weakly down into the streets of the small village, casting shadows across the grass beside the paths. The thatched rooves shone with the morning's dew, and ...

*We've already tried the PMing thing, but that doesn't work, i mean we can't flip a coin, or play paper, sissors, rock, though we did try.*

Where does Pat buchman come into it. Paper backs are so much easier to read then hardcovers or old books. i don't think i could read an E-book, too intense.

Lyin looked towards the dragon soaring throught the sky in front of her, Hyte's grace was unmatched and she'd always been happy with her moneuverabilty(?). But it was her strength ...

Lyin walked back to the stables after she heard the announcements, Hyte was resting up, too tired from the trip to bother coming to the stadium. As she approached she ...

I've edited it to include your ideas. :D Thanks guys, I prefer it as it is now. 8)

The forest was green and lush, bright, vivid colours masked the sense of anticipation and foreboding in the air. No birds sang and even the wind seemed to hold it's ...

"You're really positive aren't you?" Eryc grinned, "It's always been a fault of mine." She smied and looked again at her hand, now what. Her hand was bad but she ...

Keira sat down at the table and placed the picture back on it, she wondered why he kept it, surely he reminded himself of the past that can never return ...

Keira sighed, "Fair enough I suppose, living alone like this, I'd get lonely too." She smiled, Eryc seemed to be able to get her to open up like she didn't ...

"Um...you know poker?" Eryc grinned, "What are we betting?" Keira smiled back, "How about, how many questions we get to ask the captive?" His smile vanished, Keira realised that that ...

Lyin struggled to hide a chuckle, though he was her competition, Jackle still found ways to crack her hard shell. Hyte saw her and laughed. "I knew you wouldn't be ...