TamaraGoesRawr

I understand how you feel in this poem, but I think you need to make it longer. I like the questions; they make a person think.

I'll never forget the happiness It would hurt too much Kind of how it hurts to know you gave me false love But each day I'll go on living I'll ...

This is so pretty, I can really relate too it. I liked the way you worded things because it gave the poem a specific mood.

They were so alive High and flying Each day the flew higher Until you tore them from the sky Cut off their wings And let the butteflies inside of me ...