TamaraGoesRawr

I really like this. Was it really your first? Hard to believe. ^^ I loved the imaginary paart of this poem, and I'm eager to hear more from you. Keep ...

I liked this. It reminds me of a storry, but I can't remember the name. Is that story where you got your idea? That doesn't really matter, but that's just ...

I liked the imaginary here, but this was kind of confusing to me. The way you worded some things, was what confused me. But other than that this was amazing. ...

Plagiarized.

They were all good. But I didn't like how you put them all in one post; that makes it kind of hard to read and focus on. I liked the ...

This was your first poem? Well, I sure couldn't tell. It was good and alot of people can relate to the feelings behind it. I couldn't find anything wrong with ...

Hey [: This was really good, but the only thing I'd maybe change was the repeating of the word "sometimes" and where you put that word. The punctuation and descriptions ...

This was pretty good; I love your use of words. But I think you need to break it up a bit more, to make it easier to read and more ...

This is good ^^ Everyone can relate to it, and I can't find anything wrong with it. Good job.

This was really good, I liked the imaginary feel to it. As far as I'm concerned, you should submit this to a contest or something. I didn't find anything wrong ...

The feeling in this is really common; I like that. That's how I feel alot, I know there's something wrong with them and always ask, but when there's something wrong ...

This's really relatable. Especially the part about, her standing beside him, but him not being with her; that's happened to me recently. I liked this poem and really, there's nothing ...

Niki's everything I wish I could be Strong and brave and beautiful Niki's never tired and she's never weak She'll never give up fighting Even though she can no longer ...

Well, this made me slightly sad but good job.

This poem really had one emotion and was very descriptive; I liked that about it. I also like the way you used words. There's not really anything wrong with it. ...