TamaraGoesRawr

This is kind of confusing. How are you feeling his/her tears? And you had a small problem with capatalization. Also, try saying "Now you're gone" instead of "you're gone now" ...

I liked this poem. But the last two lines. might sound better if you reversed the order. Other than that, great job.

Plagiarized.

I liked this, but it's a bit confusing. Are you saying that you did something you're not proud of? Other than that small setback, this is good.

I liked this. But I think you need to space the sentances a bit more, to make it easier to read. I liked how the feelings were back and forth; ...

I love it, honestly. It's really relatable and the feeling is clearly shown. I can't find any punctuation or anything that's wrong with this poem. I'd like to hear more ...

This is was good, but I agree with Mellophone; the large words were kind of a setback. Also, I think you need a few more commas so you don't end ...

I like the details in this. It reminds me of a song by Escape The Fate ,actually. I can't really find anything wrong with this poem. I'd like to hear ...

I like it [: It shows emotions clearly and realistically. Maybe try rhyming a bit more with the ends of sentances. But other than that I can't find anything wrong. ...

I love this. It's kind of humorous, but it also shows alot of emotion. I can't find anything wrong with it. Good job [:

I like the way you stated this. It's true, that everything beautiful fades or dies. One pointer though; maybe try for some more descriptive words, when describing colour and things ...

Plagiarized.

I like how relatable this poem is [: But try adding some more describing words, just to give that extra something. But really, there's nothing wrong with it. Keep writing.

Honestly this was one of the best I've read so far. The imaginary and the mental images you gave me, and probably most other people, we're vivid and happy. I ...

This is good [: But I think you should try and make it rhyme just a little bit more, so it flows better. I liked the descriptive words and how ...