Talulahbelle

hey! Overall this was great idea! Very original and interesting. But there's something lacking. First, I think that maybe you would feel better with it if you took the characters ...

Tears sprang into Kieran’s eyes, but she fought them back. Her nails bit into her palms as Tarah softly drug her claws over Kieran’s skin, soothing her like she had ...

...and riding it was a...

...a boy, licking an icecream...

Dearest Chellelynn! Don't fret! You say this is your first ever half-written novel? And you're looking at it, thinking "Oh lordy, this is terrible!", right? Well, we've all been there ...

Hey! Overall I thought this was really good. It's got an interesting story line and characters - I only have one thing. I feel that you told us too much ...

...her almost unstoppable imagination, because...

...might actually happen, because...

Hey man, you'vejust gotta be creative. Have some fun with it. Get goofy - read Aesop's fables and maybe even some Grimm brothers to get you in mind of the ...

Thanks, Tanya! I really appreciate your reviews!

There you go, darlings! Now, who else? Come on, I can handle it!

Okay, it looks like Lumi has been really thorough, so I'll be quick and vague, if you don't mind. One thing that gets me is my lack of connection. Your ...

Hey there! Ummm.... this is very hard for me to review. I feel like there is something about it that I can't put my finger on. On reading that English ...

Hey there! I thought this was excellent! It was really dark and stuff, but super entertaining. There were a few parts - just phrasing and such - that could've clearer, ...

Hey there! I'm requesting to make you happy! If you have time could you look at this? Its a novel, but I only have two chapters done so far. Here's ...