Talulahbelle

I haven't read the first two chapters but I saw that you didn't have any reviews so I figured I'd try and help. One thing I have a problem with ...

(Okay, this is a little thing I wrote quite a while back. Its raw and I don't think I've edited it at all. I have no idea where this tale ...

The only people who have read my writing are my mom, my aunt and my counciler. None of them give reviews or critics what-so-ever. My English teacher has asked to ...

Oh, length is a big deal for me. I find myself typing pages of my favorite books into word to compare computer-to-book ratios. I have issues with pacing and plot ...

I love it! There are a few typos and there are things I dont understand about the story... I'm sure I would if I read more of it. But overall ...

This is a really interesting story but the main character... Chloe's reaction to all of this happening to her doesnt seem believable. I would have a major freak out, not ...

I like it. The wounded stranger has pulled me in by doing nothing but bleeding. I'm trying to think about critiques bc...well thats waht we're all here for right? I'm ...

I have a character named October. About fifteen pages in someone starts to call her Tobie. This nickname suits her so much better and that's really how I think of ...

Thanks guys! This is a tiny segment of something I wrote awhile ago and i do go on to explain things but it was my first posting and i was ...

I have to say, i agree with all the other guys. The opening has been way over used. Change it up a little. Put all that info into something more ...

I'm really interested in whats happening already but there is one thing that I see that bothers me as i read this. The coversations. Go into more...detail, i guess. Not ...

Mena could hear the footsteps tapping their way to her door. They were like the clicks of a clock or the beating of a heart; mundane but a reminder that ...