Talulahbelle

By the way, here's the link to the prologue:

So I found this on an old jumpdrive and I thought you guys might help me clean it up a bit. I fully intend to work on it eventually, but ...

“May I have this dance, Miss Kathryn?” Kathryn beamed up at Alastair. He was so beautiful and rather wealthy, too. What a perfect match they would make! He would be ...

Hello! This is really good! Thing is, you lose your tense in the last paragraph. Run should be Ran and "what she does best" should be something like "what she ...

I think daisy got most of everything but there's one section that bothers me that she didn't get. There were only two citizens who had ever had the nerve of ...

Hello, I really loved this and I hope you do right more because I will definitely follow it. The only things I really noticed that you could work on would ...

Anti-Sue! But I am a little bias...you see I love villians, they're my favorite characters... Captain Hook, Darth Vader, Damen Salvatore, and Lestat Lioncourt are all ten-million times better than ...

Today, I made superheroes out of my friends and some other random people at my school (Landoom and SuperKipp!), then sung songs from Moulin Rouge in Spanish class with three ...

I'm so intrigued by this! I haven't read the first installment but I certainly will now! There weren't many grammar mistakes (one their that was supposed to be a there, ...

Hey, I'm really drawn in by this story. A few of your sentences fell awkwardly, but it wasn't that big of a deal. I love that you kill the character ...

Hello, friends. You're a creative lot so...does anyone know any good puns? I really would like to have some about zombies (zombies don't sweat it!)...long story short, its for an ...

Hey, I feel that everyone else has covered most of the major things...or the nit-picks... make sure you keep everything easy to follow, describe the people and surroundings more and ...

Egdar! Mine's a tiny little wood nymph that thinks she's a warrior!

Hey! I'll get to your reviews shortly, but I'm at school so it'll be a little late. Sorry its taking so long! And I promise I'll get to it as ...

I can completely relate (I too am lacking some confidence)! Everytime I get on here to post something my stomach knots up and I get really nervous. That anxious feeling ...