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Re: Character deaths
Totally depends on the story! Sometimes you can fit multiple deaths in there and only after the end is the reader like "Oh! A ton of people died there!" Harry ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Having Trouble with Opening
Hey everyone! I'm just climbing out of the Writers' Block Hole and reworking a story that I've had going for years now. Thing is, I - like so many of ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Title Advice?
I'm having trouble with giving my novel a name. I'm in the midst of the editting process (third run!) and I'm feeling like it'll be time to send it out ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: The Keeper Chronicles #1: The Dark Angel of Peace
Okay, um... just a few points. Firstly, how old is this kid? Three? He strikes me as way too articulate and understanding for a three year old. It really pulled ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: What are ways someone would summon a dark spirit?
Personally, I think this is one of those things you should feel free to take artistic liberties with. THere are so many different beliefs and cultures, and they all do ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: How do you think the person above you looks?
Kind of like a mashup of Jasmine and Belle. Lucky.
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Anddd...I'm Stuck.
I have serious commitment issues when it comes to my writing (don't tell my characters!). I've found that either one of three things always helps... 1.) Step away and follow ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Show not Tell
As said above, this will become easier with practice. Don't frett, dearheart. It helps me to stop, close my eyes and put myself in my character's shoes. Use all that ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: How do you do it?
I have that problem too! - Though mine is easily blamed on my muse (he's a total spaz). What I find helps is to write little notes to myself. Say ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: So I have a idea..
I would totally love to vote! Please PM me when you get this set up! (YWS or your website)
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Geography: Reality vs Fantasy
Hey there guys. In your opinion is it better to create your own story location or to use real places? Want more specifics? Okay, I'm writing a story where fantasy ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Mental Disorders
I'm writing about a group of characters that were largely neglected and abused all throughout their lives. They range from 4 to 20 years old, boys and girls alike. What ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: My Problem with Third Person
It may just be that you need to stop thinking about it and just let the words come. Eventually you'll get the hang of it. Secondly, maybe your story just ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
(AWESOME QUESTION!) "Yeah, could I get some color and a childhood? Thanks," Leven says, his eyes heavy-lidden with his sour attitude. Kieran's face is shaded for a moment as she ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Leven merely stares, his brow cocked with a mordant gleam in his eye. Vallen laughs darkly. "What's to like about princes?" "I have to choose?" Flower asks, her attention momentarily ...
Apr 7, 2011
