Talona

tnme22, Thank you for your review. i will work on the things you have mentioned. i wrote this story when i was about ten years old and am still working ...

here's the start of the only story i have come close to finishing. January 1st, 1989 Monday. 6:00am Chief Dacoda has worked it all out with the Government. We are ...

hi Emma i completely understand about the spelling which is probably why i had no trouble reading this story. i wish you would continue it as i would like to ...

I read both parts of your work and they are great. but please, please, please! keep going. i want to know what happens next. Does Justin start having some of ...

I think this would be a fantastic story except that it is a bit choppy. I had a hard time reading it because of that problem. your theme is very ...