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Yes please! I'd be grateful a review on the first chapter of a novel I'm currently working on/editing for younger readers:- A Lost Soul (working title) - Chapter 1 Thank ...

Wow, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this - such beautiful writing! I'm struggling to believe you're only 15 - your writing style is so assured and mature. I can't spot any ...

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Hello :) I would be very grateful if you would review the first chapter of my story for me please :) A Lost Soul (working title) Chapter 1 Thank you! ...

I'm working on revising one story I started writing roughly two years ago and I think it was mainly influenced by watching a lot of Tim Burton films. That sort ...

I think I was 6 when I wrote my first story it was called "The Lost Kittens." Basically a witch stole these kittens from a brother and sister and they ...

I've finished my first novel for younger readers. It deals quite a lot with that feeling of entrapment and frustration you can have as a child because adults insist you're ...

Wow I love the intrigue you create around Danielle, leaving us wondering what has happened for her to be so repulsed by the idea of human emotion and the memories ...

This is interesting, I would like to know more about his parents; like what would make them have no love whatsoever for their child... I'm hoping they're not just pure ...

This was an enthralling read! I could feel Meredith's pain, both emotional and physical. I liked the part where she was reflecting on her life and how she wanted more. ...

Hello this is the first chapter of a 'novel' I have managed to finish. I am now beginning the long and difficult task of editing and would be grateful for ...

Don't worry I knew what you meant :) Here's the second part to this first chapter. CH 1 - PART 2: Gradually the trees began to become sparser and the ...

I liked this because I could relate to it! All I can really think to say is to perhaps think about adding some description so we can imagine the characters ...

I loved the honesty of this piece, because often when people don't really understand something they over dramatise it and it lacks meaning, but in this case you've done a ...

Nice to meet you Always :) & thanks for the tips & advice, I really appreciate it!