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Hello you helpfully reviewed the first chapter of my story a little while a go ('A Lost Soul') and I was wondering if you would do the same for the ...

Hello I would really appreciate a review on the second chapter of my story, but it'll make little sense without reading the first so may have to have a quick ...

Hello, I have been playing with this chapter for so long it's become a bit of a blur to me and I feel it's time to gain some outside perspective. ...

This is very well written and impressively well researched. Just to reiterate Kaiden, whilst the background information on each character was very interesting, all at once was perhaps a little ...

Thank you both for you comments :) - It is a bit too adjective-tastic as my first drafts tend to be before I have a trim. - The fire got ...

Hi, just quickly wanted to say thanks for the review, just what I needed! It was really informative and constructive advice that's going to be very helpful as I plough ...

This is just a part of an idea I'm currently mulling over. I don't really know where I'm taking this yet, or whether this part I'm going to post will ...

I'll help fix your problem in offering you my first chapter of a story - other fiction - for younger readers. Please be as brutal with your critique as you ...

Hello, I read this a couple of days ago but didn't have time to review so I made a mental note to come back and ta-dah here I am! First ...

Yes please! I would be very grateful if you would review the first chapter of my story for me :) All nit-picks welcomed :D A Lost Soul (working title) Chapter ...

This is just the sort of story I enjoy :) I couldn't spot anything technically inaccurate. I love the impact of the opening line and the voice of the main ...

You know you're a writer when only writing will make you feel better.

Thanks so much for the review, I really liked your suggestions - especially about describing the scent of the house & more of the boy's appearance. I'm glad you enjoyed ...

Hello :) So basically I have lots of time on my hands, time I would love to spend reading and reviewing because well, quite selfishly really, I always find that ...

Reason for writing: I write because I have to otherwise I'd go insane. I'm the sort of person who can be themselves more on the page than anywhere else. I ...