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Re: Where does my story go?
story is rough, I mean ROUGH. I envolves ghosts, wicca, body theives, romance, and mystery. After i clean it up, where should it go? Oh, and I suggest that a ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 1}
I feel really connected to your characters, especially Alekah. I like him. But the interactions and conversations dont feel very well rounded. (Tell me if i dont make sense. I ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Deleted
This is the first thing i have ever read or replied to on this site and i have to say that i am stunned. This story is so fascinating and ...
Jul 5, 2009