Talking_Pinata

Wow. I read the comments first and I was looking for a big laugh. I mean, the turns to saddness and not really happiness. Its like they're slowly admitting because ...

The author's note is now up! Don't forget to read!

Thankyou for the compliment and edits! They helped so much! I'll be editing it soon!

I do the same thing. I just *thinks* I guess you could say poop out words and see what happens. Great poem! Add some punctuation though! It'd help with flow.

Ah. It's an anxiety attack. I'll put that in the author's note. Thankyou for the comment!

NOTE TO READERS: This is a poem about my recent minor anxiety attack. I am slowly feeling the need to be diagnosed, but my mother doesn't believe in mental disorders, ...

This? This was awesome.

DX You stirred up my disorder! *shakes fist* Oh well. Yeah, you see, I'm almost positive I have some sort of anxiety disorder because at random times or at random ...

Wow. My jaw dropped at the last line. This was nice too. I love your writing. Wonderful job.

Wow. This is nice. And the first stanze made perfect sense to me. I loved this. you earn a star

I agree. It was pretty good and you broke away from the uber cliche-ness I find in most poems! *gives you candy* On the other hand, the images could be ...

NOTE TO READERS: The prologue and Chapter 1are in my portfolio. I know I have made quite a few mistakes on this so I'll be needing some help from everyone! ...

Ummm....thankyou? Haha.

Thankyou for the review! I've changed some things around according to what you've pointed out as mistakes or "nit-picks" Thankyou!

Thankyou for the review! I agree with what you said about the last bit. I'll get to reworking that as soon as possible! Thanks again!