Talking_Pinata

I never realized just how much that makes sense. I never knew why they felt happier after drinking. I myself have never had a drink in my life, so I ...

I only somewhat understand what people mean by shoving it down our throats. You take somewhat of an aggressive take on this, but really, it's the way I think it ...

Wow. I almost have no idea what that said, in a good way. It left an imprint on my mind of a message that I'll be learning later in life, ...

Thankyou everyone! And yes, this is supposed to poke fun at cliche. Not really supposed to be that much of an emotional piece, but I'll take the compliments I can ...

Thankyou! More compliments! I can't believe it!

Sorry, for the bump. Really, really sorry.

Hey! Sorry that it is so close to your story! That's a complete coincidence, I promise! Thankyou for the review and I'll be making changes very soon in the future.

Thankyou! I appreciate the compliments! I thought that might need more description too. I'll be looking into that very soon.

Thankyou! Wow! This makes me feel really great right now! Thankyou for the gold star and the compliments! They made my day by far!

Sorry. I really need reviews so I'm bumping it.

Note: I already have chapter 2 up and its completely valid, no revising before critiquing that needs to be done. ------ Satu sat up too quickly and the world spun. ...

Ah! Thankyou for the critique! Very helpful! Means alot! I understand your point about pace, I'll be looking into that as well!

Well written article and some nice proof I must say. ---- I'd just like to add my opinion in as well: I find a balance, I try to look good ...

Ah! please space the paragraphs! Sorry. It just annoys me. I will return to review when that has happened. Thankyou!

Some of it confused me, but overall the descriptions were very nice. Colorful language too, you didn't repeat words! Thankyou for that! Also, I agree that you rock for using ...