Talking_Pinata

Just edited it. I'm sure there are new mistakes so PLEASE review. :)

Ah! I just realized I wrote this just a LITTLE too quickly and didn't proofread too well. I agree, this needs more emotion! I'll add that in my revision version! ...

Thanks again and again. This means a lot to me that everyone is reviewing it. :)

The half moon hung in the sky like some great celestial yin-yang. Four people sat on the grass, bathing in the moonlight. Silence reigned though the feelings raged like rivers ...

Wow. I was near clueless until the end and then the shock came. I disagree with the above grammatical error, and I would like to say that everything in it ...

Thankyou for the review as well, it means a lot to me. :)

Thankyou for the review and I'll be thinking about all of your suggestings. :)

There is no world but here; there is no time but now. The mist hangs low in the valley of the farm and it never lets up. It is a ...

Wow. This is nice. I've never really thought about the personification of a bed. The format and grammar is perfect, in my eyes, so let's talk a tiny bit about ...

I didn't know about gold stars back when I read this. I've returned and now I DO know what they are, and you're getting one from me. Awesome job. I ...

Haha. I just have to. I just HAVE to point out that Einstein wasn't a genius in english AT ALL. EVER. XD I found that comment hilarious. Sorry if I ...

Nice rhyming big time. I also love some of the amazing imagery you used. I completely agree with Eimear, a real gem of a poem. You DEFINTELY deserve one shiny ...

NOTE: This is based of my short story called "Cabbage". You can find it in my portfolio! THANKYOU! ----- NOTE2: The prologue rushes into things, I belive, but I think ...

Incredibly sorry for the bump. I'm in desperate need of reviews!

Incredibly sorry for the bump. I'm in desperate need of reviews!