Talking_Pinata

ACK! ROSE IS FREAKING COMING BACK?! ARE YOU KIDDING! I was SO ripped off when I nearly cried then?! *growl and then cheers*

DEATH NOTE

YES.

I hated it. It was nothing like the books to me. I'm not arguing with the people who liked it, it was just my opinion. They mixed characters, changed around ...

Thankyou!

I on the other hand from all the other critics, LOVE the idea that the Grandfather and the boy's names are kept hidden until later. It makes it more thought ...

GAH! Just a disclaimer to readers. I did indent the paragraphs, the computer then disobeyed me and un-indented them.

Prologue Penetrated only by twinkling stars, the night reached its peak and a small village slept peacefully onwards. From a particular small and insignificant house there came a short gasp ...

Thankyou everyone! I will be making changes based on comments and my opinions.

Thankyou for your suggestions and corrections!

Thankyou SO much. I will look forward to editing it so that it fixes the issues you showed me.

I NEED PEOPLE TO RATE THIS IDEA AND WRITING STYLE AND GIVE TIPS!

La la la la la la la... The forest was quiet and the only sound was the child's voice echoing throughout the untamed woods. Her voice weaved through the treetops ...