Talking_Pinata

Thankyou for the comments and opinions! I'll take everything into consideration! *much love to my readers*

I don't see any gramatical errors... Oh! I'm very interested! Questions arise from just reading this! I'll be waiting only slightly patiently for more!

Awe enveloped her. She stared up into the bright, caring face. “Are you really my guardian angel?” she asked innocently. “Yes,” he replied bluntly. “So you’re going to protect me ...

WOW! Good writer you! Spare me of your wonderfulness! (it was really well written) and I like how sophisticated the child sounds, that isn't a problem at all for me. ...

All grammatical things appear to have been covered. *pokes above post* I really agree with most of those, I just can't say it as well as they can. Anyways, this ...

I really liked it! The tension is building. I have a few points to make. When you say "sense" you mean the word: "since" also, towards the bottom where it ...

Wow. I feel the suspense and mystery building. Good job. Every peculiar detail of your characters that normal authors would have left to let the readers think was "corny", you ...

Terrific. One thing. Towards the end it says "“Like always,” She let out another sigh." If I'm not mistaken...I do believe that the SHE should be an I. Just pointing ...

Wow. I read the first sentence...and my attention was caught. Is there a prologue to this or do I start here? That is really my only question. If you could ...

The sound continued endlessly; a sound that could drive a person insane… Nova reached up and slammed the snooze button with unnecessary force. She pulled the blankets up around her ...

Wow. Amazing so far. No complaints here as of right now. I really don't see anything that doesn't make this a fascinating read. I am thoroughly caught up and waiting ...

Found you. You know I already love it.

Hello! I decided to return the favor of your critique on my work, so here is my view on it: Weak is spelled WEAK in this... I like this story, ...

Wow. O_O I spelled WARM wrong *headdesk* I am such a stupid child.

She was very tall and lanky, much like a toothpick herself. Dirty blond hair and defined brown eyes glared dangerously at him; wordlessly explaining that her previous statement was not ...