Talking_Pinata

*nothing to say* *oh no, she's gonna start blabbing* That song was perfect. The sun. And for ME, its eerie, cause it was my lullaby as a child. ANYWAYS. I ...

Wow. On to part to. That's all I have to say. On to part two.

The scuffle of my feet on the ground seemed to be the only noise. When I listened more closely, I realized that I had drowned out the irritating roar of ...

Thankyou everyone! I'll be working on my rather strange sentence structure for awhile...and then I'll edit it! Thankyou again!

Masquerade- A party at which masks and costumes are worn, whether an informal gathering of friends or a formal ball. We all have to agree, that parties are fun. If ...

Thankyou again! I will look at this until I figure out how to leave everyone with something of substance! Thankyou for all other reviews I will take everything into consideration ...

Ah! Thankyou for the praise! *bows to you* Thankyou thankyou THANKYOU! Ah. But the ignorant adults don't have angels! Cabbage knew he had to leave, for the children needed him ...

Thankyou that is a great tip for me! I'll use it to my advantage and look back over it!

Couple roughs spots. I swear I tried not to let my emotion get away. But the ending was AMAZING! I think I've found Cabbage in a Tom! XD Sorry. Anyways. ...

Thankyou everyone. One thing I'd like to clear up. This whole thing was supposed to be...*thinks for word* clearly hazy. I know. Contradictory, but I describe everything and the readers ...

Thankyou everyone for your reviews!

Thankyou for all the reviews everyone!

WOW! Very good! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PM me when you get more! Hm, no particular thing I found about grammar. I just wanted to point out that sometimes it occured ...

The yellow and red light blurred in the reflections of the dull and flickering parking lot lights. I stared into the shallow puddles that made the lot into a virtual ...

Thankyou! I will definitely consider your review helpful! Thakyou for the nitpicks I need to change!