Talking_Pinata

This prologue sparks my intrest (as a prologue should)! Good job. It makes you curious as to what his job EXACTLY is. How do these souls return to their bodies? ...

Thankyou for the reviews! I've already edited it once based upon your nitpicks! They were very helpful ^^

“Dance as if no one were watching, sing as if no one were listening, and live every day as if it were your last.” -an Irish proverb Certain nights downtown, ...

Hm. The ending seemed cliche to me. I mean its all suspensful then..."SUPRISE!" -___- That's just my opinon though. In all other senses its very well written!

I liked this! I wasn't so pleased with how it ended though. I mean...we're waiting for something terrible and...the cliche "suprise!" That's just my opinion though. Its well written in ...

Wow this story was very wonderful! The horse's point of view! Brilliant! The title is an eye-catcher!

The rhyming was well pulled off in this! The story was great. Not much to complain about! I loved it!

Nothing to complain about! Very interesting and somewhat saddening. (actually rather saddening)

Little Raven Black, how can I love thee? How can I not force myself to hate? You vile, unwanted dark beast of the air, I can see behind the dark ...

Oooo! I like. Nothing really for me to pick at that hasn't already been gone over. I like this character! As for suggestions (I'm not too bright on this subject): ...

I don't think everything is SUPPOSED to be clear, is it? I thought it was really good! and eerie. Very eerie, at least for me! I'm sorry for no detailed ...

Thankyou everyone for the advice! Its very helpful!

Thankyou everyone! This was very helpful!

Thankyou everyone for the terrific reviews! I'll be editing it when I get a good chance!

I gained a star! WOOT WOOT! Okay, sorry, bye.