Talking_Pinata

May Heaven be down, and Hell be up? Something is smiling down, from that bright, sunny sky. Something sinister, something sweet. Questions, questions, fornights of curiosity. Brown eyes and curly ...

O.o? Alright then. Gay marriage is good. (not. Sorry. I'm straight XD) Thankyou? ^^; ?

That was the point. Thankyou.

I can honestly say I started to cry at the last line. No more critique needed.

Just a quick disclaimer: Sorry for not knowing much about poetry. I tried this today in english class and I just want somethoughts on how it turned out.

Congrats on doing the difficult task of grabbing my attention! The first stanza, although repetitive, work amazingly well. I read it to the end, and these are the emotions I ...

Wow. That was very deep. One tip, add punctuation! That'd improve the flow alot, but I like how the beat-ish thing is.

Secluded from community, you like your dark corner, don't you? Tiny plush rabbits. Ankhs and chains. I'm still living, don't put me in this box. Madman! Eye-like windows blink. Boredom. ...

I really would appreciate reviews...

Hmmmmm....one thing....9 in the afternoon is a recently created P!ATD song (panic! At the disco)

Thankyou for the praise! It means more than you can imagine! ^^

So sorry, but I've gotten to the point where I depend upon you for reviews! DX! So here's chapter one of "Yarn". You so graciously reviewed the prologue, and it'd ...

I need some more edits! Sorry so much for bumping DX

Thankyou! I'll be looking into the things you pointed out later today! Glad you liked it!

Thankyou for the review! I've tried to edit and expain some, and I'll be thinking about how to change that even more efficiently!