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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me

    Wow. That was simply...amazing. I mean, you're so right. Dirt and the has a story and...whoah. *bows to you*

    Jul 30, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Every Nook -edited-

    I have EDITED THIS PIECE! 7/29/08 Please review and re-review! THANK YOU!

    Jul 30, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Every Nook -edited-

    Thank you for the complements/suggestions everyone! I agree totally with the "rushed" factor and I'll be adding some more in there when I think of more. @_@ Thank you SO ...

    Jul 26, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Bubbles

    As others have said, very creative. I'm glad you PMed me to get me here. :) Exhilarating is the word for it, isn't it? Yes, it is. Good work and ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Every Nook -edited-

    Thank you for the review. Everything you've said about covers what I thought the problems with it were. I'll try and edit it soon. :)

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Every Nook -edited-

    NOTE TO READERS: I'm sorry if you find this offensive but I would not like to hear your political, moral, or religious views about it. Thank you. EDIT: THIS IS ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Storybook Chapter One

    Ah yes. And I wasn't sure if I was delusional or not, but it turns out I was right when I thought that I was hearing the word "she" a ...

    Jul 18, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Storybook Chapter One

    Comments by me will be in bold Prologue For weeks, I have had this in my head. The only problem was that every time I sat down to write, I ...

    Jul 18, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Monster

    That's HARDLY I review Xena. We're talking about the writing piece, NOT the situation. And if you noticed, the author said that her friend was better now.

    Jul 18, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Diamante Defense

    Don't make me do it. XD Okay here goes: "I think this story would belong better in scifi" :3 Told you. Anywho. I'm not one of your masterminds who do ...

    Jul 18, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: End.

    I understand what you mean when you say it could have been better as a poem. Although I agree, I just couldn't seem to put it into verse form. So ...

    Jul 17, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: End.

    Thankyou for the review. :)

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: End.

    Author's Note: I need your honest opinion on this one, guys. :) --------- I know what the end of the world smells like. It smells like a picture book that’s ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Angie -newly edited-

    Thankyou for the reviews. I appreciate the notes on physics especially. Thankyou for all your help.

    Jun 29, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Angie -newly edited-

    Please?

    Jun 28, 2008


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World