Talking_Pinata

Great job! The second person was awkward for the lonest time, but at the end it blurred out into not caring what "person" its in.

Thankyou for the critiques!

Thankyou for the critiques I'm working on fixing all the things you've pointed out (it might be awhile)

Thankyou for the compliments~!

Thanyou for the review

bumpity bump bump. Sorreh.

Less "poor me" here? I don't really know. Let's find out.

Haha. Thankyou! I appreciate it a ton!

Dark corners, teary eyes, and love that never works. Standing in the rain, and being home alone. Gazing at the stars, and think of you. (who's that?) Occasionally happy, something ...

Once again. I COMPLETELY disagree with the suggestion to make the voice less sophisticated. Children's logic and ideas far surpass us, but they have trouble finding the words to make ...

Thankyou for the review! It carries emotion for me, but I appreciate the comments!

Although original, its somewhat cliche. Anyways. Good work, I can't think up quotes myself.

Really? You liked it more? Thankyou! This means alot! Yeah. It was actually rather randomly written.

thankyou for the critique. I have to say, I disagree with some of what you said, but I'll take it into consideration.

That was deep. Very moving. It makes you see the wrongness of shaming gay lovers. Its wrong to shame them. Its who they are.