Talking_Pinata

This was very good! Despite its potential cliche-ness, you avioded it beautifully and created a whole other idea! *gold star for you*

Wow! Thankyou! This means so much to me all the compliments from everyone!

Thankyou for the compliment! It means tons to me!

Wow. I'm so glad your friend is better. This is rough (meaning emotional, not choppy.). Good job, I really liked this!

Thankyou for the suggestions and compliments, I changed the beginning...I don't know if it works, but it does for me. ^^ I also want to say just how much I ...

Wow, thankyou everyone! This means more than you can imagine to me!

Wow, thankyou everyone! I guess I'll be working to improve this one despite the fact that it was spontaneous when I wrote it...!

Sorry for the bump

Texting you is so tedious sometimes, why do you have to point out that it seems like I don’t want to listen? So you can’t handle this then, can you? ...

I also disagree with the first two comments, this is most definitely a short story with some raw emotion that drives you to finish it. Not only does it capture ...

Haha! That was amazingly captivating! I didn't even blink to quit reading until it was a dream! Good work, and keep writing.

This was very good! It caught my attention in the beginning, and although you lost my attention somewhere in the middle with slight repetitiveness, the ending caught my attention once ...

Wow! I love the fact that you never actually state that Buddy is a dog! It makes it much more intriguing to read as you slowly figure it out. The ...

Very haunting and creepy. I actually question what EXACTLY it's about. Vampires came to mind, actually. O.o

*blushes* Thankyou people! All the compliments mean alot to me!