Talking_Pinata

So sorry. I want reviews cause I need them. So sorry for bumping. (and sorry AGAIN)

Sorry for the inconvienience

Aw. Continue this! I want to know what happens very badly! I got a good description of the day as well, in the beginning, with the popsicles. Only one thing, ...

Thankyou! You're critique is appreciated!

thankyou for the compliment! That's more of the feeling I was intending, great job at figuring it out! XD

That was nice, I loved every bit of it, great work!

I have to say I agree with the people above, it is rather confusing as to what is going on...maybe write more and it helps to explain? Sorry for being ...

Thankyou for the critiques but I won't be changing this poem as to the fact that some people really seem to enjoy it...! THANKYOU for the praise as well!

Could everyone try to give their opinions on the overall story? As well as nitpicks, that is a lovely way of reviewing in my eyes. If you really don't have ...

Thankyou! All the compliments are so great!

Periwinkle came and attacked it first! How suprising! Thankyou! I'll be looking into the nitpicks soon ^^

I sat down at the computer and mashed the button that turned it on. The little blue light flickered twice before blinking on and the whirring noises of the computer ...

Very nice! I liked basically everything about it!

Very nice! I just love narrative poetry and this was a good job of one!

Oh! I loved this one! Personify time! Brilliant idea! Two thumbs up to you and a gold star to go with it!