TalesOfHailz

Oh and regarding the use of "person's" and "thief". I didn't want to use gender related words as I wanted to keep the gender a mystery until she was captured. ...

Thank you very much Truth for taking the time to review my work. I really appreciate the honesty and it's great to have someone else read my work for a ...

Hello everyone! I'm a newbie here and this is my first post. I am looking for honest opinions on the story I am writing but more about how it is ...