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The studio in downtown St. Paul was large, well-respected, and well-equipped. The front was also full of bright-eyed youngsters as new to karate as he was to teaching it. That ...

I'm going to be honest with you. :) You have a great general concept here, and your vocabulary is pretty impressive too. But the way you portrayed this general concept ...

I'm fascinated with this because, even as a Christian myself, I cannot tell which end of the spectrum the writer is coming from. At first glance, it seems obvious. "Oh, ...

Mr.Knightley:(Nice s/n, btw.) I'm really interested in hearing your speculations about Jett and Phoenix. Private message me or something with them if you could! :) Also, I knew Jett referred ...

[[This is not intended to be a short story on its own. This would be an excerpt from a novel I'm working on. Any feedback appreciated.]] Late-bloomed lilacs wilted on ...

Hey, thanks so much guys. I really do agree with you about the forced lengthy line. I can't remember what made me ultimately decide to stick with it, but I ...

[[This isn't really finished and I'm not, by nature, a lyricist or song-writer by any stretch. It's certainly not my forte. When I do dabble in it, it all revolves ...

The idea for this story really is a cute one, and that alone kept me reading it. If I were to offer any constructive critical advice though, it would be ...

I didn't particularly enjoy this piece myself, and do agree with the first reviewer above that the adverbs were overused. However, I do not think that this piece is poorly ...

I agree with Yuriiko that the root cause of this rant needs to be addressed more, or you run the risk of writing something that appears to be little more ...

[[This is an excerpt from a story I've worked on in the past. It's a flashback of a young dad's; he and his a few years prior to the novel's ...