TalaPaulwic

**Hey, I'm going to drop out. Sorry.**

Some of the sections I see as many words for "grammar Nazi".

Gosh, the formula seems so cliched, but everything down to the Lord of the Rings has it. Very good, very descriptive. Thank you! :)

**I'm waiting on someone to post, and I'm not in the castle, so, sorry.**

**Don't worry, I check a few times a day. I don't plan on leaving this at least for a while. :D**

**I have nothing against that.**

Oh dear, I see this going bad. Something short like 20 questions please?

Rosella The fairy had managed to reveal herself. When two men came she just took off into the air rather then finding a place to hide. She had revealed herself ...

2/10 Your first idea is so horribly cliched I wouldn't read it unless it was the last piece of writing on earth. 1/10 Your second idea is even more cliched ...

Hello, I'm Tala, and I was the first Mary-Sue ever made by my author.

7/10 Well written, but you make it sound like we know "the two humans" when we have no idea what they are. The night was hot, and wet...wait, that's humid.

Slime

I'd turn it into another right foot and walk around like a man insane. What would you do if a crab came after you with a knife?

Elinor Brynn: The Beatles song Elinor Rigby, and a crew cut....

When life gives you lemons claim you can make your face implode, then eat them all at once. Live expecting Murphy's law to kick your ass, but try for better. ...