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It has a lack of description, still I think it's cute. I can't provide any more advice other then describe it a bit better.

**Can I join this?**

Joan sprinted over to the alien. She jumped onto him. She fell to the ground on top of him. Though a member of her team was pouting, and trying to ...

Her jaw dropped. She followed her and again knocked the sword out of her hand. This time she snapped it in half. "I am your commanding officer. That is no ...

She grabbed onto Lheah. When she had a clear shot she smacked Lheah as hard as she could in the hand. This force was enough to knock it to the ...

Joan sparked brightly. She flexed her fingers. She was slightly more relaxed. If she could at least get her anti gravity generator to work she could run... well fly for ...

**EEEEEEK an alien. Welcome on.** Joan watched Lheah raise her sword only to slump into a limp posture. Happiness washed over her. When she was being carried along to sick ...

Joan felt it hit her. She laid there in the sand. She was running on a solar battery. She still could think. She could still send messages through a wireless ...

She didn't take notice of the other android who wasn't standing to far off of them. She had fallen to the ground. Her eyes wide in a panic. Her skin ...

**Thankies. -hug- We understandes eachother**

**Yeah, I'm sorry. Feel free to do that lightly. But just remember she is highly sarcastic and has a need for dominance. I tend to snap. I'm not used to ...

**The only spots left open are alien, humanoid things. P.S Buggy, I would rather you didn't speak for my character. I don't feel right about that. And her personality is ...

Sunlight streamed through the curtains like golden beams. Dirrella’s eyes fluttered open while the light slowly trickled across her face, with a sigh she swung her legs around and got ...

The description you provided. You really poured your soul into this. I like it. Such feeling. Such emotion. Yeah I does seem a little much for a child. So understanding. ...

Okay. This is just like an actual chat room. Still they annoy me. So good job, you made it clear it was a chatroom. Just not my thing.