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1.) You lack detail. Describe things. Make it come alive. 2.) How old is the girl in this? She doesn't seem like an adult. It is kind of creepy in ...

Hello. I just have some things to say. 1.) Present tense? That limits you and makes it seem awkward to the reader. If it's a script I understand, but it's ...

Name: Joan Avarah Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: Joan Avarah Power(s) One or two: She has two sets of wings, thus giving her outstanding flight. And instead of fingernails, she ...

She sighed. Then she fell to her knees. She gripped her hair. "That I love you! He adjusted the frequency that I think on." She shut her eyes. She rubbed ...

Lynette: She pulled herself free of Aprils grasp. Something was happening. No, it was happening. She was blacking out. Yet it was so painful. She felt like her soul was ...

She pushed Lheah off of her. She stumbled to regain her balance. She narrowed her eyes at Lheah. "Are you batty? You deserted the team, gone rogue, and can no ...

**A few weeks**

**Anyone with saved spots is fine to post.** She heard someone scream from within an alley. She looked to see who it was. She found a man who had grabbed ...

**Okay, any signed up RPers we've started. Put stars, or something to mark OOC.**

**Eh, it's her choice, not ju choice. :D**

**Welcome on, that takes up the open spots. Feel free to start guys.**

**Alright, that leaves one open spot. This seems popular, hehe.** She walked down the street. She still had a scar where the shard had hit her. She kept the shard ...

It's the year 2012, humans have discovered some kind of alien technology. It lives above the earth. It keeps them safe from the harshness of space, and invaders. This was ...

Well look at that. The first TBRPG got positive feedback. So hey, here is the next one. This one is still a year old. Today TBRPG takes on someone who ...

It was simple. I like it like this. I just went pee, I have to go again now. Very funny, simple humor. I think you could turn this into a ...