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Re: The Lost City
"If I stay there for to long I'll get stuck, then I'll starve to death." He grumbles. He stares at the human. Then he hits it on the back of ...
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Re: The Lost City
He took a few steps back. "You are sick. Very sick. Is there a wall I can move?" He walked behind a nearby chair. He had to pull out of ...
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Re: The Lost City
**It's fine, our posts said basically the same thing. So no worries.**
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Re: The Lost City
He stood up. Magic time. He thought with a slight smile at the edge of his lips. He shut his eyes and inhaled lightly. He let a breath out. He ...
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Re: The Lost City
David had seen the fairie before. This fairie was bad news. His wink only made him feel worse. He followed along. "I'm David, do you have any... skills Gil?" He ...
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Re: The Lost City
He stood up. He rubbed his head. Where was he. He was in an alley. The gross human world. He smiled. For a first time through the portal, it went ...
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Re: The Lost City
**Sweet!** Name: David Le'flurr Age: 26 Gender: Male Personality: Rather distant from the humans. He see's himself as slightly better then humans, yet not that much better. He is torn ...
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Re: The Lost City
**Can I jump in?**
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Re: Halfbreed Chapter One
Okay, I'm not getting too specific here. Almost every time a character speaks I hear in my head a sort of robotic person. Most people have bad habits, and tend ...
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Re: Welcome to Project Blackwing
She clenched her fists. "Then you're walking into a trap, he intends to use us and our planet as prey. If we fall for this, then we've just doomed ourselves ...
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Re: Suzi Edwards, Prolouge.
I submitted something, it was about the Grim reaper. These two aren't really directly connected except in the prologue. Gasp, this is! Prologue. My friend Grim. I was first found ...
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Re: Welcome to Project Blackwing
She walked over to the alien. She grabbed onto his arm and tossed him against a rock. "If I explode you're going with me! I am not leaving you for ...
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Re: A normal day for Grim
Well maybe not so normal. This is just something I wrote to clear my writers block. But hey, this I can improve. My modern style of writing. “You. I see ...
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Re: Welcome to Project Blackwing
She ran and grabbed onto Richards arm. "No, don't near it. You can't die." She shut her eyes. She tried hard to keep the two languages clear in her head. ...
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Re: Letters Chapter 1 & Prologue
I could tell you poured your soul into this. You put it into the oven. And now you have a rose... pie... soul... thing. In other words it was really ...
Sep 15, 2009
