TalaPaulwic

It looks like you were in a rush to write this. You could have gotten lost, and everything moved very fast. That's all well and good too. Just be careful. ...

It's touching. Very touching. I like the first paragraph about how depression grips you. I've never thought about it like that. So beautifully tragic. I didn't fully understand the ending. ...

This is... THE PROLOGUE. I wanted to try a murder mystery. Those are always fun. So here is the prologue. Rip it to shreds. Please. I want to improve. Also ...

Name: Kayla Swanson Gender: Female Planet: Sun Personality: Rather tender, caring. Likes to wander the other planets, and simply guide those whom are lost. She likes seeing her children. Appearance: ...

**If anyone is a kid, I can spot you walking down the hall or something.**

Dibs on the sun!

I trembled as I walked. It felt so odd walking down a hall, hearing such silence. I had been in this building for a while. Away from the others whom ...

Yay,now there are two other beginners to keep me company!

**Not much. Dehrik(ebil) bumped into Morrigeanne(ebil), and were engaged in battle by Jane(good) Who is hovering face down next to them.**

Doo deee dooo, waiting for this to start.

**Welcome new profiles! Feel free to hop into RPing**

I love this sb, lots of fun. The people are fun too!

Name: Jerri Fredrickson Age: 6 Level of Hero Program: Beginner Specialty: Speed, and stealth. Occupation: In training. Appearance: Jerri Fredrickson Personality: Rather shy. Has a lack of trust toward

He glanced at the door. "Should I walk through the wall and scare this person off?" He was curious. He faded out of the physical world. He was positive that ...

I call a spot for a girl, were can I put my profile up? This looks fun.