TalaPaulwic

This is very powerful. It's oozing with emotion, and it's easily transmitted to the reader. I like that. Your grammar could use a little bit of tidying, but that's pretty ...

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You start the piece in present tense. That's okay. Not a common thing to be used outside of chose your own adventure books. Not to much later you switch to ...

This is my submission for the September contest. It is 927 words long. I got the plot from the generator, and I really liked what came up. I don't have ...

In my opinion I love the Beatles. All of their songs are AWESOME, Revolver is the best album ever made if you ask me. They're my favorite band in the ...

[TalaPaulwic enters from camera right.] Just little bits of detail like that could have made your script more effective. The problem with reading scripts is that you have no idea ...

Oh wow. At first it sounded like it was a by-stander. Then the progression into being a murderous bastard. You told a long story in three paragraphs. An introduction, a ...

Alright. Hello there. I am TalaPaulwic, and I will be reviewing you today. I have a few things that I would like to go over about this. I'm hoping I ...

**Hehehehe, well you're welcomed!**

Skyeler, Source of All Evil, TalaPaulwic, You, It, or Dkler. A deafening scream escaped her lips. Her voice was deeper so it wasn't as shrill as she hoped. "Morgan! It's ...

TalaPaulwic, Skyeler, or Dkler. She paced around in a fuss. Her feet stomped. It wasn't intentional in the slightest. Figuring out where her arms and feet went was always a ...

Erich Nestel She seemed nice, but she just shoved him off, then left. A groan passed his lips. Shaking his head, he slowly moved into the room that she had ...

Go ahead and post, I'll post in a second.

I say that tomorrow we shall start it. Unless anyone objects?

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