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This is adorable! And quite hilarious. The title is quite catchy too, and works really great with the poem. 'It's a freaking senryū she thought, you uneducated little.. "witches" ' ...

Hahaha! Somebody must have reeaally ticked you off XD Oh my gosh that's awesome. At first the structure was slightly off-putting, but you definately made up for it. I read ...

Sorry some of these may be very short or bland, but I'd feel ignorant to only critique half of them. I also can't tell the difference between an italian verse ...

Hey there This poem is quite sad, but I like it. It seems to have quite an irregular flow to it though, I think it needs a bit more structure. ...

Heyhey I don't really know how to critique this, it's pretty long, but I like it. It's like a really well written biography (or autobiography, I can't tell the difference). ...

If I should grow old will I be just like you? Piecing families together with fairytale glue. Make believe a Daddy for this storybook of mine, from photo album pages ...

Hey there This is quite cool, I like the way it progresses from stanza to stanza. I would recommend you try splitting the long stanzas into shorter ones, they look ...

Hey there, you're new too! :) The little foreword thing before your poem - you need capital letters to start your sentences, and more punctuation. I know that's not about ...