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Hey there I shall follow the tradition and repeat that word (that still isn't in the dictionary). Awww! Personally I disagree with Rick. I think the fact that you haven't ...

Execution: Executed Dalen dared to look up at the special crowd that gathered in the courtyard. This wasn't a public sentence, no, he got the good one. The guillotine's silver ...

Hey there I did download this... and I'm working through it :p (I usually give a lot of detail on advanced critiques). This is my way of saying if I ...

Hey there! "The way his head slammed against the wall shook the two onlookers", nice opening line, it instantly made me curious as to what was going on. It's all ...

Hey there I think this is a bit... tidsy. It's hard to give a good review when there's not really much there. The main problem with things this short is ...

Hey there, Welcome to YWS! I thought I'd say that since it's your first piece on YWS. You're still lacking a review though, you're supposed to write two before your ...

'Mr Hill, Mr Hill!' I swerved into his classroom. He was already scribbling notes for his first lecture across the board. 'Can I join your lesson today?' He turned with ...

Galatea: "Any descriptive ending in -ly should be removed from your writing immediateLY." "(...I highLY recommend it to everyone.)" Sorry, I find that quite funny :p But I agree that ...

I often imagine stories with the perfect character in there, but when pen goes to paper that character always seems to get bullied by the others, or dies. I'm thinking ...

*Scrunches up post and sits patiently at the drawing board*

Sounds fun! (Umm, I'm not sure if this power is allowed, let me know and I can change it) Name - Rei Withers Age - 15 ish Gender - Female ...

I waved goodbye to professor Wyne and headed down the corridor. To finish that painting I'd have to go to his next class, which put me in the predicament of ...

Hii I agree with pinata, this is so cool, you've pulled it off really well. 'Through the sun and rain and snow' - the rythm here is slightly off, though ...

*Soul society, hollows... ahh the kid by the lamp post! I remember this one :) This is going to be a looong storybook. I can't really think of anything relevent ...

I sat by the fountain again, tounging my lipring whilst staring at the bland sketch of Rupert. He just wasn't looking himself - which, considering I'd made him up a ...