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*I'm fine with that* Ugh... What? Something wierd was happening, I knew that much. Though that probably wasn't very much help. It took me a while to decide I wasn't ...

Hmm... This is really interesting. In the first paragraph you've used a lot of commas, which makes this a little hard to read. Looking at the way you've tried to ...

Hey there. Ahh I want to read more! Nice work though. I do think there's a step missing in there. Chester said he was going to prove his visions, draws ...

I watch her soar through the sky with feathers whiter than the clouds, her wings sparkling with the last of a long night's rain, and the early morning sun showering ...

*Is 'recycleable' a word? It looks really odd* I have to admit, I hesitated. 'I...' I was about to commit myself to what? 'I'll come.' Outwardly I was grinning enthusiastically, ...

(Sorry about that, I couldn't think of much else) Another monster? Where were these things coming from! We pelted through the school hallways in search of Kai, and maybe his ...

That guy was half demon? Sweet! Well, not really. I started to wonder if he had split personalities or anything like that. I know I wouldn't have a problem if ...

'I knew it!' I gasped, raising my fist childishly. Professor hill and Kestrel turned to the door from which I peered. 'I mean...' 'You, can see them too?' Kestrel asked. ...

*Kittykat, did that demon just eat Double N?* [i] Agh, alive... Check. Concious... Check. Healthy... Check? [i/] These guys where some pretty awesome fighters. I'd have to thank the healer, ...

It does sound quite interesting, and I think the idea of somebody (greg) who feels so guilty that they would kill again, is a brilliant idea if you can pull ...

Ever had a favourite word that became popular? A name that someone else made famous? How about a phrase that got overused so everyone hates it now? I have many. ...

Hmm... Swearing in stories. I'm generally opposed to swearing because it's incredibly uncreative. There are more interesting ways to say things, whether that's in real life or in writing. If ...

I was climbing through the remains of one of the industrial buildings, those things that used to mass produce junk before industry became a pretty silly concept. Over the years ...

Hey there I love this! You've got some really good descriptions here. I especially like the way you've described her as 'she', instead of giving her an actual name yet, ...

I'll start, can I start? I've never started before. That makes 'start' sound like an inuendo for something... *Waits for permission*