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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (5)
THis is amazingly good. You describe everyone nicley and I am starting to feel like she is a real person. I love your writing style too! every thing seems realistic ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Twilight Fan Fiction
Are you like Meyer in disquise? :) That was very good. As some one said before me it really did remind me of one of those gushy scenes that make ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: I wanna talk about ME
Hi Kaylyn! I am Tabitha Lillian. I also adore the twilight series and am looking to read the uglies. What genre do you like to write and do you have ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Rawther new. . .
Hi I am tabitha Lillian, I happened across YWS serching for other teen authors. I love writing, mostly vampires fiction, and love the twilight series. My favoite author is Ameila ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
I think I may cry. . .
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: The detached- prolouge
very good. One thing, I would like to know what the child looked like? apparently it was a girl due to the name but if there had been no name ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: A Bloodied Rose part one
Terribly sorry if this is in the wrong place but it is romantic so I deceded to post it here. Critisim loved and please check out more of it on ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: What makes Purple Prose?
purple prose is a curse of mine.
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Breaking Dawson
I had a dream that it was bellas wedding and I was Tanya and I grabbed Bella threw her into a wall and grabbed edward and started making out with ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: A Vampire Romance
I thought it was very good. One thing, I do not know much about historical fiction but I feel like you used the word Tis quite a bit. Also, I ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Sorry if this is the wrong forum but I have a question . .
ok, I enjoy writing mostly about vampires. No realistic fiction for mua! But where should I post my vampire novles? Yes, most are romantic, so would they fit under the ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Vampires before midnight.
it was really good. I like the new take on vampires, how they all dont have to go to a new school and fall in love with a human! But ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: The Loser
I love it so much! You amaze me! I could picture every thing perfectly and it was just amazing. One thing, I woudnt mind if your posts were longer. It ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Romance 3
ok still very good but a few things I didnt get, earlier her mom is comforting her because they broke up, then in the morning she just randomly walks into ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Moonlight Romance (part 2)
This was good, once again! I love it. One thing It was good but it all happened a bit fast. Like one seccond she couldnt live with out him, and ...
Aug 25, 2008